I really loved the Greek aspects ingrained in this story.
However I felt distant between myself and the narrator (it's in 1st POV) and the way certain characters were done and whatnot just frustrated me. Personally I would have liked the personality unfold even by a little bit and not someone jumping to the rescue saying "oh, you're too naive to know any better, BUT...." I dunno it kind of got on my nerves lol.
Then all the sudden the real personality comes out. I dunno about you but WOW. Revis, you sure know how to make a creepy obsessive AND possessive guy. XD
And what's sad is, I don't really remember the main character's name. ._.
I swear though, I giggled at the new "swearies" I think they were at least? I get the frex out of there.
Ugh, how this went just really turned me off at the end of the story.
Not really something to read soooo early in the morning in my opinion lol.